She ran down the list, checking off each item and looking around to review her progress. The azure seas teemed with fish. The fertile land was bursting with new life. The stars shone brightly at night and the sun brought forth each new day. Two beautiful people walked hand in hand along the beach. (She was particularly pleased with how they'd turned out.) Chewing the top of her pen she reached the bottom of the list. Tick, tick, tick.
"I'm exhausted. Close the door behind you," she said and sank into a plump of white leather cushions to finally rest.
The prompt for this week's 100 word challenge over at Julia's Place is in bold. Why not pop over and enjoy the other entries?
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I like this concept. She...... ;-)
ReplyDeleteMother nature at her busiest :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful post - very clever. x
ReplyDeleteI think God can definitely put her feet up now! Good work, on both parts.
ReplyDeleteThanks Molly :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for your kind words Sandra, I liked twisting this one just a little bit :)
ReplyDeleteAnd on the seventh day ...... Very good twist indeed. Love the fact that she's ticking everything off on a notepad like she's just done the shopping.
ReplyDeleteOooh - this was a brilliant concept. Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteThank you, made me smile writing it *grin*
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this. Clever interpretation of the prompt. Trust a woman to have a list :-P
ReplyDeleteThanks Anna. A woman without a list is like a coffee without a custard cream, you can get through it but it just isn't as satisfying :)
ReplyDeleteWith a list finally ticked, you need wonderful pillows to flop into! Thanks for joining the 100WCGU - great to share your work!
ReplyDeleteThanks for having me Julia!
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