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Wednesday, 21 March 2012

The Red Box

He sat for a moment, not waiting for the silence, but for the roar. The red box sat on his lap and he drummed his fingers on its supple leather top, soaking up the atmosphere and raising an eyebrow at his smirking opposite number. Finally, his adrenaline peaked, he stood, placed the box on the lectern in front of him and opened the two brass locks with a satisfying click. As he lifted the lid to pull out the new budget his hand closed upon a slinky-silkiness that he really hadn't expected. "Damn," he thought, his bluster extinguished, "wrong box".


This week's prompt in the 100 word challenge for adults is '...the red box...'. Read the other entries over at Julia's Place.

Image credit - HM-treasury.gov.uk

16 comments:

  1. Excellent! :-) x

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  2. Thanks my dear, made me smile writing it :D

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  3. I giggled.  It's like "What's in the Queen's handbag?"

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  4. I know, wouldn't you just love it to be true?

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  5. I love how you painted this -- the air of confidence he had until the very end when he discovered his mistake. Wonderful!

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  6. This really made me laugh out loud.  Did he really pick up the wrong box or is it the revenge of a jilted mistress...

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  7. Oh, I so wish that had been true. Can you imagine! Hahahaha very good indeed.

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  8. I know, what a scandal! Thanks for your kind words :D

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  9. Definitely worth a chuckle. Will they never learn to use different colors? haha

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  10. Hilarious, loved reading this. x

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  11. Thanks so much m'dear *blush*

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  12. I know, right? Thank you kindly :D

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  13. That's a pretty big Ooops! Thanks for the smile!

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  14. You're most welcome! Glad you liked it :-)

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